A new client once asked me to tag along with him at an investor conference where he was going to pitch his business. After 45 minutes or so of running through his pitch deck, he finally asked this audience of savvy investors if they had any questions.
Immediately a hand shot up.
“What does your company do?”
Here, the leader of the company, standing before 60-80 prospective investors, having all the time in the world, failed to clearly communicate his company’s value to them.
When your prospects come to your website, they’re asking that same question. What do you do? But they won’t stay nearly as long to wait for a clear answer. And they won’t shoot their hand up on your contact page to ask, either. They’ll just leave. Likely forever.
This isn’t an isolated problem. The internet is full of corporate websites full of good intentions, but lacking in clarity.
Your website needs to deliver a clear, compelling offer to your prospects in order to attract the right customers — and repel the wrong ones.
The key is to design an offer and describe it in such a way that the right clients can’t help but click the “Contact Us” button, and the wrong clients will walk away already knowing you’re not the choice for them.
But this kind of compelling clarity is often hard to come by—for three reasons:
So… how do you know if your offer needs to be redesigned?
Here’s a few questions to ask yourself to see if your offer is meeting its mark:
Do you stumble or spend a lot of words describing how your company can help a prospect with a specific problem or reach a specific goal?
If you have more than one sales rep, ask them (separately) to sell you on the value offer. If they stumble or their answers are not consistent, you have either a training problem or an offer problem.
Ask your prospect during a call, “Based on what you know about us today, what do you see as the primary value we might bring to you?” Does their answer fit with the value you want to convey?
Are your sales cycle times inordinately long? It may be that qualified prospects don’t yet have a clear compelling value to move them to action, or your pipeline has too many prospects that are not value-qualified, wasting your sales team’s time. They might not know what you are, and enter into a sales discussion and realize you aren’t a good fit – but it may take a LONG time to get there.
If you're serving more than one market, do you have a specific value proposition for each market? Or do you have a broad value proposition that you’ve had to water down to make it work across diverse needs? It’s okay to have a broad market proposition where the needs across different industries are identical, but that is more the exception rather than the rule.
If you found those questions to be challenging, you won’t want to waste another minute further confusing your prospects and losing sales. It’s time to redesign your offer and you can use our offer design roadmap as a guide:
Jump back on your website again. Forget everything you know about your company. Even that you work there.
Looking at it from a fresh lens, would you wonder, What do they do?
If so, you know what to do.
If you want our help with offer design, book a strategy call with us today. We’ll review your messaging to ensure your offer is clear, compelling, and effective, then we’ll share our results with you, including any areas for improvement. You’ll be able to take action right away — whether you choose to work with us or not.

WRITTEN BY: LEARY GATES
Leary Gates is a strategic advisor and co-founder of Coefficient, the value design firm helping B2B companies rethink what they sell and how they grow. He writes the Strategic CEO newsletter, a weekly exploration of leadership, strategy, and the next growth curve.
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A new client once asked me to tag along with him at an investor conference where he was going to pitch his business. After 45 minutes or so of running through his pitch deck, he finally asked this audience of savvy investors if they had any questions.
Immediately a hand shot up.
“What does your company do?”
Here, the leader of the company, standing before 60-80 prospective investors, having all the time in the world, failed to clearly communicate his company’s value to them.
When your prospects come to your website, they’re asking that same question. What do you do? But they won’t stay nearly as long to wait for a clear answer. And they won’t shoot their hand up on your contact page to ask, either. They’ll just leave. Likely forever.
This isn’t an isolated problem. The internet is full of corporate websites full of good intentions, but lacking in clarity.
Your website needs to deliver a clear, compelling offer to your prospects in order to attract the right customers — and repel the wrong ones.
The key is to design an offer and describe it in such a way that the right clients can’t help but click the “Contact Us” button, and the wrong clients will walk away already knowing you’re not the choice for them.
But this kind of compelling clarity is often hard to come by—for three reasons:
So… how do you know if your offer needs to be redesigned?
Here’s a few questions to ask yourself to see if your offer is meeting its mark:
Do you stumble or spend a lot of words describing how your company can help a prospect with a specific problem or reach a specific goal?
If you have more than one sales rep, ask them (separately) to sell you on the value offer. If they stumble or their answers are not consistent, you have either a training problem or an offer problem.
Ask your prospect during a call, “Based on what you know about us today, what do you see as the primary value we might bring to you?” Does their answer fit with the value you want to convey?
Are your sales cycle times inordinately long? It may be that qualified prospects don’t yet have a clear compelling value to move them to action, or your pipeline has too many prospects that are not value-qualified, wasting your sales team’s time. They might not know what you are, and enter into a sales discussion and realize you aren’t a good fit – but it may take a LONG time to get there.
If you're serving more than one market, do you have a specific value proposition for each market? Or do you have a broad value proposition that you’ve had to water down to make it work across diverse needs? It’s okay to have a broad market proposition where the needs across different industries are identical, but that is more the exception rather than the rule.
If you found those questions to be challenging, you won’t want to waste another minute further confusing your prospects and losing sales. It’s time to redesign your offer and you can use our offer design roadmap as a guide:
Jump back on your website again. Forget everything you know about your company. Even that you work there.
Looking at it from a fresh lens, would you wonder, What do they do?
If so, you know what to do.
If you want our help with offer design, book a strategy call with us today. We’ll review your messaging to ensure your offer is clear, compelling, and effective, then we’ll share our results with you, including any areas for improvement. You’ll be able to take action right away — whether you choose to work with us or not.

WRITTEN BY: LEARY GATES
Leary Gates is a strategic advisor and co-founder of Coefficient, the value design firm helping B2B companies rethink what they sell and how they grow. He writes the Strategic CEO newsletter, a weekly exploration of leadership, strategy, and the next growth curve.
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A new client once asked me to tag along with him at an investor conference where he was going to pitch his business. After 45 minutes or so of running through his pitch deck, he finally asked this audience of savvy investors if they had any questions.
Immediately a hand shot up.
“What does your company do?”
Here, the leader of the company, standing before 60-80 prospective investors, having all the time in the world, failed to clearly communicate his company’s value to them.
When your prospects come to your website, they’re asking that same question. What do you do? But they won’t stay nearly as long to wait for a clear answer. And they won’t shoot their hand up on your contact page to ask, either. They’ll just leave. Likely forever.
This isn’t an isolated problem. The internet is full of corporate websites full of good intentions, but lacking in clarity.
Your website needs to deliver a clear, compelling offer to your prospects in order to attract the right customers — and repel the wrong ones.
The key is to design an offer and describe it in such a way that the right clients can’t help but click the “Contact Us” button, and the wrong clients will walk away already knowing you’re not the choice for them.
But this kind of compelling clarity is often hard to come by—for three reasons:
So… how do you know if your offer needs to be redesigned?
Here’s a few questions to ask yourself to see if your offer is meeting its mark:
Do you stumble or spend a lot of words describing how your company can help a prospect with a specific problem or reach a specific goal?
If you have more than one sales rep, ask them (separately) to sell you on the value offer. If they stumble or their answers are not consistent, you have either a training problem or an offer problem.
Ask your prospect during a call, “Based on what you know about us today, what do you see as the primary value we might bring to you?” Does their answer fit with the value you want to convey?
Are your sales cycle times inordinately long? It may be that qualified prospects don’t yet have a clear compelling value to move them to action, or your pipeline has too many prospects that are not value-qualified, wasting your sales team’s time. They might not know what you are, and enter into a sales discussion and realize you aren’t a good fit – but it may take a LONG time to get there.
If you're serving more than one market, do you have a specific value proposition for each market? Or do you have a broad value proposition that you’ve had to water down to make it work across diverse needs? It’s okay to have a broad market proposition where the needs across different industries are identical, but that is more the exception rather than the rule.
If you found those questions to be challenging, you won’t want to waste another minute further confusing your prospects and losing sales. It’s time to redesign your offer and you can use our offer design roadmap as a guide:
Jump back on your website again. Forget everything you know about your company. Even that you work there.
Looking at it from a fresh lens, would you wonder, What do they do?
If so, you know what to do.
If you want our help with offer design, book a strategy call with us today. We’ll review your messaging to ensure your offer is clear, compelling, and effective, then we’ll share our results with you, including any areas for improvement. You’ll be able to take action right away — whether you choose to work with us or not.

WRITTEN BY: LEARY GATES
Leary Gates is a strategic advisor and co-founder of Coefficient, the value design firm helping B2B companies rethink what they sell and how they grow. He writes the Strategic CEO newsletter, a weekly exploration of leadership, strategy, and the next growth curve.
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